Sunday 16 September 2012

Eternal Embrace

Venus and The Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali

Eternally entwined
In a saltation divine,
Captured mid-step
By a genius adept.

Venus, with your glamour,
I am truly enamoured
To be evermore en-laced
In your glorious embrace.

posted for Magpie Tales
photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid

8 comments:

  1. nice...it really is lovely...and i like the divinity play...to be evermore enlaced...that whole section toward the end just really flows marvelously....

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  2. How lovely, a saltation divine. Nice rhyming and rhythm too.

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  3. Well done again my love!.. As of my post... We will make it happen...

    JJRod'z

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  4. Richly worded I enjoyed the flowing, graceful pace of this poem.

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  5. Very powerful, very worthy invocation , thanks

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  6. Love how you used the word saltation .......... perfect in the poem.

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  7. Well done. This one works well, and I like the rhymes.

    =)

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